Good start Sherina, I think that you have stuck religiously to the script and given a good detailed account of yourself. To improve your work further you should avoid using the jump cut and film some cutaways. YOu could also vary your shot sizes when filming your main interview. You also need to make sure that the 'location footage' is integrated into the main interview using the overlay edit function. Good first attempt and well done for meeting the deadline and over coming the technical difficulties which you have had.
Good start Sherina, I think that you have stuck religiously to the script and given a good detailed account of yourself. To improve your work further you should avoid using the jump cut and film some cutaways. YOu could also vary your shot sizes when filming your main interview. You also need to make sure that the 'location footage' is integrated into the main interview using the overlay edit function. Good first attempt and well done for meeting the deadline and over coming the technical difficulties which you have had.
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